I like how you describe the word "light" you didn't say light, you describe the word with shine. Not just that, you used "I am the light that shines in your eyes. Not just that, you wrote more!!!!!!!! ( I don't want to write it because it's too long :D)
Niko. I like that you put in your Colour writing that a fruit that a monkey loves and not just saying what fruit it is. The thing I really loved was that you said I was dark but yellow changed my colour forever.